This was amazing. Keep up the good work. Really good writing, and very, very impressive animation.
Hahahaha. Brilliant writing!
I REALLY liked this! At first, the bird seemed like kind of a dick, but he's not such a bad guy. I also liked how the bear pounced like a cat. Very cute little animation. Definitely impressed with this!
It's a cutesy, fun little project. Nothing wrong with that, and you're right, you've gotta start somewhere. Stick to it!
Not that bad, honestly. I do like the hyperbole of the movements, lends an originality to it.
I like the animation, really good back and forth in body language. Problem I had was that it didn't really have a strong finish, it just sort of... stopped happening. Perhaps you could have the guy who was pronouncing it incorrectly say something like, "It's still better than MySpace.", but pronounce MySpace like 'My Spacky", then have the other guy just sigh, or something. Still, I didn't mind it, keep it up!
There weren't a lot of options for that, since I was using script and sound not created by me. It's the beginning excerpt of a longer video, and I didn't really feel like animating the whole thing XP
Check out the link in the description if you want to see how it would continue. Glad you liked it, for the most part! You definitely brought up valid points, but they happened to be once I couldn't change, haha.
"And she was so upset, that she... dies... That doesn't sound right..." I really liked this. Great writing, and the monotonous tone of the narrator was really fitting. Well done.
Awesome. This maintains the flair of the comics so well. And it was made even better by the fact that you DIDN'T give them voices. Kudos!
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